Thrilled and hilarious! I
was wildly excited all through Abubakar’s Season
of Crimson Blossoms and quickly quaffed the offering down my gullet without
me knowing. It’s the story of a
common Hausa family, of a widow mother, an elderly woman of stately dignity
living with a niece and a grandchild. What a thrill you read a novel and meet
people you know. As I read, I found myself laughing and yelping and whispering
and talking to characters I feared people called me mad.
Lines are poetic and
ringing in Abubakar’s work. It is a delight. Characters and their dialogue seem
real and believable, speaking and behaving convincingly. Faiza, the eccentric
girl proves mesmerizing in her manner and speech pattern as a real Hausa girl.
She is young and knows the new fashion in town. She disagrees with Hajiya over
dress and appearance, laughing at Hajya like my sisters laugh at our mother for
her lack of sense of trends.
Abubakar must have caught
a conversation one-on-one with his characters. Have you met Mahmood Mai-shayi,
quick, energetic and agile? He reminded me of a tea seller in our area. Abubakar
created memorable characters by letting them to speak themselves. However, Season of Crimson Blossoms is nearly ruined
by attempt at providing what Orville Prescott called “political documentary
details.”
People like me who had
never been to the closet of women bedrooms would find the book revealing,
revealing the secret thinking of women about sex and things we never hear about
girls.
Beyond the world of
Hajiya Binta and her sexual adventure lies a world of rhythms of street culture
and subculture assembling at San Siro, and streets of Jos with its joy, daymare
and nightmare. There is the notorious Nigeria’s image looming large in Reza’s boldness
to confront the law for hindering his illegality. There is something that many
people out of this culture may not understand about Reza, you understand.
Season
of Crimson Blossoms is a story of Hajiya Binta, a widow who
struggles between the intersections of faith, culture and personal fulfillment.
Hajiya Binta was originally caught in a tasteless marriage that almost looked
like sexual slavery, escaped her past ten years after her husband died, Mal
Zubairu, and finds life in Reza, in whom she sees and feels her late son, Yaro.
At childhood, Yaro shared a lot with Reza, was in drug and weeds and in the
street puddles. Hajiya nursed deep affection for Yaro but was forbidden to show
it openly “because of kunya, the socially prescribed modesty” she “had to live
with…”
Reza breathes life to the
story and propels it. A product of broken home, he was raised by stepmothers
after his mother was separated from his father. As a result, he grew up with a
thirst for maternal emotional needs.
While Hajiya sees her son
in Reza, Reza also sees his mother in Hajiya Binta, to whom he felt not only
filial affection for but also romantic.
While putting a ring on his palm his mother’s smile enchanted him. “The
elegant with which she performed the gesture mesmerized the boy” (p.41). The
boy also has affection for his mother, “the gleam of gold in her teeth and her
beautiful face shimmering like an image under water” fascinated him. Something here
is already hinted. Therefore, the affair between Reza and Hajiya Binta is
transferred Oedipus
complex and inverted Electra complex respectively – Reza “mother-fixated, she, “son-fixated.”
In this case there is a
little problem about their relationship, since each is struggling to mend the little
jarred pieces of their past. However, half-way through the reading I became
disturbed and troubled as Hajiya’s sexual escapade became wild and untamed. Blame
the author for authorial conspiracy, letting Hajiya going to hotel rooms and giving
her so much energy to conduct her affair with agility and rhythm that surpassed
person her age.
You won’t get troubled
about the whole thing until you pick Hajiya out of the fictional world and
plant her into the real. A mother of four, with a string of grandchildren and a
niece? What is even more troubling is that Hajiya Binta
is decent, respectable and dignified surrounded by the comforting atmosphere of
family life. Imagine a woman of her age having an affair with an irresponsible
young man like Reza with all the putrefying smell and bad feeling after each
sexual encounter.
It’s hard to forgive Hajiya
given that Hadiza and Munkaila approached her with the proposal of remarrying,
which she never bothered to consider. Hajiya Binta could have fought oppressive
social codes in ways that preserve her honor and dignity and that of her
family. She could marry since the children are not totally opposed to the
question of remarrying than as to the character of the person. The fact that
there would a possible resistance to the idea of marrying Reza proves that
decency and respectability are cherished values in Binta’s culture.
With courage and candor,
Abubakar touches on raw aspect of society. The question however, is not to
blame Binta directly, but to look into the condition that begat her, that begat
Reza and Gattuso and San Siro.
PS
Parresia did a splendid
job on editing and proofreading. However, I think there is the need of
improvement on consistency on whether to italicize throughout or not, and check
really if “Unguwa” can be written as Angwan Rukuba Junction (p.169), (later I
learned this is how many Hausa-speakers of central Nigeria say it) and if Mararaba
market (p.181) is not actually Mararraba. I almost forget this, that two dots appear
at the end of the paragraph where Munkaila was stamping his immaculate shoes
“every now and then” (p. 159).
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